Sunday, October 3, 2010

Microfiction Monday

Wow!  Susan at Stony River, author of this meme, says this is #51 -- which means nearly a year of microfiction!  Thank you Susan for hosting even when you feel like throwing in the towel in other parts of your life! You motivate and inspire us...



And my story:


Fly me away, she sighed.
No, not away, he replied.
I’ll take you to mum, he exclaimed!
Stop this pony ride RIGHT NOW, she flamed!

29 comments:

Pat said...

Oooh, she changed her mind rather quickly. That must be her big brother...sounds like he's a VERY RESPNSIBLE big brother.

Book Bird Dog said...

Ha, ha! I like it!

Peggy said...

Oh my, I think she is very wise to stop this ride.
So funny and sure fits this picture.
Have a great evening.

SouthLakesMom said...

No Pat, it was a potential mother in law...she wants romance and he wants mom's approval...time to flee!

Diane said...

Love your rhyme!!! Clever and true. :O)

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

She may be wise wanting to get off of the horse, then again she may be missing out on a Golden Opportunity

Sylvia K said...

Gotta watch out for those mother-in-laws!! Fun one for the day! I love it!

Sylvia

Thom said...

This is excellent. So many ways this could be interpreted :) Well done. Have a great week ahead :)

The Bug said...

LOLOL!

Ms.Daisy said...

OOOH! Loved it! Has a nice rhythm to it!



~Jean

ninotaziz said...

Mother In Law - a scary prospect for a first date!

You had me laughing out loud!

Deborah said...

Her mum will like anyway! LOL :o)

Michael G-G said...

Loved the rhyme! Loved the "mum" reference! Our heroine sounds like a spunky lass.

Have a great week.

(Thanks for your comments on my banned book week entry, too)

anthonynorth said...

Sometimes you've just got to get off. Nice one :-)

Ellie said...

Oh no - I think her new fella is being too responsible for her liking. LOL. Loved it.

Have a great week x

jabblog said...

The end of romance - loved it!

Lenore said...

heh..it's usually the guy that runs a mile when she says 'met my mother' :P

well done

Jinksy said...

Was this their first quarrel? LOl :)

Akelamalu said...

She wanted excitement.......

He's a spoilsport.........!

Scott said...

lol, most girls don't like a mama's boy, do they?? lol

EG Wow said...

SMART girl!

septembermom said...

Uh oh! She better get off that horse. LOL.

hope said...

Ah, a woman who knows what she wants..and doesn't! :)

quilly said...

Oh dear! Mum should come last, not first! Wise girl!

Marina said...

Great one! Very clever!

ruthi said...

hahahaha... oh oh... someone is in big trouble.

Granny Sue said...

A rhyming melodrama! Excellent take on this week's prompt.

Dianne said...

and you rhymed it! I love it, and I DO Have to get a sense of humor...
someone said recently (many as a matter of fact), that men are looking to marry a "mother" even if they seek fun on the side.. sheesh, 25 years later i'm starting to see the writing on the wall.

Jim said...

Mums are out these days! :)
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