Wow!
Susan at Stony River, author of this meme, says this is #51 -- which means nearly a year of microfiction! Thank you Susan for hosting even when you feel like throwing in the towel in other parts of your life! You motivate and inspire us...
And my story:
Fly me away, she sighed.
No, not away, he replied.
I’ll take you to mum, he exclaimed!
Stop this pony ride RIGHT NOW, she flamed!
29 comments:
Oooh, she changed her mind rather quickly. That must be her big brother...sounds like he's a VERY RESPNSIBLE big brother.
Ha, ha! I like it!
Oh my, I think she is very wise to stop this ride.
So funny and sure fits this picture.
Have a great evening.
No Pat, it was a potential mother in law...she wants romance and he wants mom's approval...time to flee!
Love your rhyme!!! Clever and true. :O)
She may be wise wanting to get off of the horse, then again she may be missing out on a Golden Opportunity
Gotta watch out for those mother-in-laws!! Fun one for the day! I love it!
Sylvia
This is excellent. So many ways this could be interpreted :) Well done. Have a great week ahead :)
LOLOL!
OOOH! Loved it! Has a nice rhythm to it!
~Jean
Mother In Law - a scary prospect for a first date!
You had me laughing out loud!
Her mum will like anyway! LOL :o)
Loved the rhyme! Loved the "mum" reference! Our heroine sounds like a spunky lass.
Have a great week.
(Thanks for your comments on my banned book week entry, too)
Sometimes you've just got to get off. Nice one :-)
Oh no - I think her new fella is being too responsible for her liking. LOL. Loved it.
Have a great week x
The end of romance - loved it!
heh..it's usually the guy that runs a mile when she says 'met my mother' :P
well done
Was this their first quarrel? LOl :)
She wanted excitement.......
He's a spoilsport.........!
lol, most girls don't like a mama's boy, do they?? lol
SMART girl!
Uh oh! She better get off that horse. LOL.
Ah, a woman who knows what she wants..and doesn't! :)
Oh dear! Mum should come last, not first! Wise girl!
Great one! Very clever!
hahahaha... oh oh... someone is in big trouble.
A rhyming melodrama! Excellent take on this week's prompt.
and you rhymed it! I love it, and I DO Have to get a sense of humor...
someone said recently (many as a matter of fact), that men are looking to marry a "mother" even if they seek fun on the side.. sheesh, 25 years later i'm starting to see the writing on the wall.
Mums are out these days! :)
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