Microfiction Monday occurs each week when
Susan at Stony River gives us a photo or illustration prompt. Our task (and yours if you choose to join us) is to write a story in 140 characters or fewer. No cheating -- the 140 count includes all punctuation and spaces. Once you've posted yours, go back to link to Susan's...
Here's this week's illustration:
My story:
She still wears a braided chain
made of finest silver from the north of Spain,
31 comments:
A poignant microfiction, one wonders how long she has been waiting.
You just left us hanging on that one.... Good job! :O)
Very clever! Great wordsmithing!
Ah, an intriguing ending. nice one.
Seems quite romantic to me....
Mine is up.
PG
Oh longing....a burden
so painful
when carried by the heart
I always wondered what finally became of Brandy.
That is so sad and romantic. I wonder whose name she keeps? A lovely MM.
Have a great week x
You MM is itself a good writing prompt! Well done. Very romantic.
Poignant and bittersweet . . . ever faithful.
This is a poetic and poignant expression of undying love...so sweet.
Hmmm..very mysterious!
Well done!
Mine is up
Have you a Blessed Week!
hugs
shakira
One of my favorite songs when I was young! Well done!
A mysterious love story. Very nice.
"a locket bears the name".. love it !
Clever suspense at the end of that...
Brandy...
Always an alluring tale
nicely done my friend
Happy Monday
Very cool! I love that song.
Yeah she's trying to steal a sailor
from the sea!
Excellent my friend :) I enjoyed this.... :)
To has love but lost...My 140 Hope your week goes well
I like a microfiction that makes me wonder. Good job!
I love your marriage of words and music. Clever!
Have a great week.
And now I'll have that song in my head all day! But you picked a good one.
Oh it's what's not said that is the greatest part!
Ahh--I knew those words rang a bell with me...didn't make the connection till I scrolled down and saw the record....good one....
Have a great week. Cheers!
You can't beat a good rhyme.
Dave
Dave Wrote This
....... of someone very special obviously. Do tell!
"...of the man that Brandy loved." I knew that song the instant I read your words.
I heard--just recently---that it was really about a girl named Bobbie (or some other male/female name) and they changed it to Brandy to make sure everyone knew it was about a girl.
ooohhhh, mystery, intrigue, what does the locket say? does it contain a photo? perhaps a momento?
Wow, did that take me back! I love the connection you made there.
Speaking of sea stories, my word verification (I'm not making this up) is 'hydra'. Woo.
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