Monday, May 31, 2010

Microfiction Monday


Susan at Stony River (although with the trans-atlantic move has she left Stony River or just moved to a new Stony River?) . . . at any rate SUSAN offers an illustration and gives us a challenge to write a 140 character story to accompany it. The count includes punctuation and spaces so plan carefully!

This week:




My story:

I feed you, I clean up after you, and I take you out for exercise. I am not going to pick your teeth for you!

13 comments:

John's comments said...

Typical, takes a guy so far and then lets him down. Thanks for dropping by. Mine is a homage to Friends and not a rip off! My Twitter story

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

I had visions of "The Odd Couple" as I read this. I'd stop at cleaning his teeth as well. I'm still chuckling.

Pat said...

If you do too much for them, they never grow up. Thanks for the morning laugh!

jabblog said...

Love it! It really made me smile:-)

anthonynorth said...

Apart from that, it could be hot :-)
Nice one.

Peggy said...

Oh gosh, I wouldn't clean his teeth either. You have to put down limits with these Kids!
Really fun and clever. I enjoyed it very much.

Suz said...

good chuckle!!!

Thom said...

OMG this is just too funny. I love it.great take on this. Happy Memorial Day. :)

Sylvia K said...

I don't blame him at all! I wouldn't want to pick those teeth either! What a hoot! Love it! Enjoy your day!

Sylvia

quilly said...

LOL! Dragon breath. Yuk! Teach him to brush!

Jingle said...

smart one,
you are right on track, didn't you?

fabulous writing!

mine is up.

juliana said...

picking dragon's teeth? oh my!
thanks for the chuckle :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Just picking teeth? It could have been a *much* worse request! LOL