Monday, August 30, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The talented and lovely Susan promises she'll visit this week so I must make my Microfiction Monday worth reading! So, 140 characters, including all spaces and punctuation, riffing off the illustration she provides...




The sign seemed backward. 
The teen boys thought 
that their great belpres 
were what got them to Coolville.




*I'll be late visiting - gotta go help with the teachers' back to school breakfasts at both schools.  I will visit this afternoon though!

19 comments:

anthonynorth said...

A very cool one :-)
By the way, I think there may be problems with your link.

Michael G-G said...

Hi,

Good one for this MM -- totally teen boy for you!

(Just to let you know, your link @ Susan's linkes straight back to Susan's website. Hope you can fix it!)

Have a great week.

Thom said...

Love it. I would have thought the same way :) very well done.

Ellie said...

Glad the link is fixed. Loved your microfiction. Those cool boys!

Have a fab week x

samurai said...

*snicker* Boys... 8)

Madeleine said...

Very Coolville! ;O) Made me laugh
Madeleine

Granny Sue said...

Sounds just like my boys. So sure they control the world. And can fix anything.

Have fun with Susan. We had a great visit yesterday.

quilly said...

Maybe the boys ought to learn the difference between person, place or thing, but then they'd be too smart and we all know smart people rarely make it to cool.

Pat said...

I'm not sure what their great belpres are, but this certainly did make me laugh!

Hilarious!

Nessa said...

Hmmm? Teenage boys do have some odd ideas of what makes you cool.

Scott said...

brain teaser me thinks

moondustwriter said...

Ha - they were mistaken

nice MFM

Moon smiles

Deborah said...

Hee hee :o)

Akelamalu said...

LOL great take on the pic - boys get confused easily.

Sophie said...

ohh i see what did there lol
nice haha and thank you for the nice comment on my mm, i appreciate your taking the time to do so (:

KB said...

Boys will be boys. Thanks for visiting my MM.

sylviamorice said...

Words spoken by a mom! Have a good week (what remains of it). Cheers!

Susan at Stony River said...

Oh what a good one! And I'm so sorry I missed it all week (it's taking me a whole week to visit everyone -- sheesh it never ever ends, the paperwork and red tape!) I packed one kid off to college but it's not helping...LOL

Jim said...

Good one, Mom! I think it is backwards too. I'm sure their belpres were great.
Yes, and I was stupid and quit after I got Susan's blog instead. Really I was confused and forgot to return. Please don't hold that against me. :)
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