Haiku is not complicated, and yet it can be very deep. 5-7-5 seems simple. But...fortunately, Jenn at You know ... that Blog? is very kind to beginners, so join in each Wednesday for Silly Haiku.
When will I see change?
Compassionate Creator
Lord, I yield my heart.
6 comments:
Beautiful. We should always yield our hearts to the Lord. Well played.
Aw, that's a nice one. Change can be hard to bear, but so can lack of it -- I like your take on it this week.
Thats the right spirit. allow his grace to guide your life. I often feel like God needs my help.... I try to nudge Him in the direction I think is best--who knows that God doesn't need any of my help!??!?!
This is a great haiku! Instant favorite.
JM
Very nice my friend. And so true to our values. :)
beautiful!
Change comes like lightning,
Or perhaps as candle light.
Reach out to the glow.
Cheers!
JzB
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