Monday, January 18, 2010

Microfiction Monday

On Mondays, Susan at Stony River gives us engaging photos or illustrations and then asks us to write a story . . . the trick is story has to be 140 characters or fewer. That includes spaces and punctuation. It is a challenge, but a fun one. And it's really easy to visit everyone else because what you need to read while there is short and sweet, and sometimes creepy!

Try it out! Take a look at this illustration and then write your own microfiction. You can post it on your blog, or in the comments to mine! Mine is below the picture.



"Check out these biceps! You should come with me to the gym!"

"I’ll reflect on that suggestion for a while."

13 comments:

jabblog said...

LOL! I like your twist on this.

Peggy said...

Another different take on the picture. I loved that she is going to reflect on the suggestion. Too funny, tanks for the early morning grin!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

This was good, liked how she is going reflect on it all.

Anonymous said...

LOL. What about the talking Wii? LOl. This is womderful. You do these very well :)

Susan at Stony River said...

OMG!! Love to hear she'll 'reflect' on it -- LOL

Also a nice way to avoid the gym (me too! ROFL)

Barbara H. said...

Oh, I LOVE this! Especially the reflecting on the suggestion. Great job!

Sylvia K said...

Ah, love your take on the pic of the day! How funny! This is such a fun meme and everyone seems to have such a blast doing it! Big grin for the day! Have a great week!

Sylvia

juliana said...

ha, clever and funny!

Larry said...

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment I appreciate them very much.


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hope said...

Finally, someone not enthralled with the mirror! :)

This one made me laugh out loud...well done.

quilly said...

LOL! Yeah, that one I can relate to -- but NOT while looking in a mirror.

Kay said...

Ah hah! Now this is a wonderfully different take on this photo. I love it. I could use some work at the gym, too.

Jillien said...

OoOOoO that was wonderful!! I too feel in the mood to reflect :)

Thank you, by the way, for visiting me at The Infamous. I'll be back to visit--for sure!

Jillien