Monday, February 15, 2010

Microfiction Monday



Susan, at Stony River, very kindly hosts this meme. It's short, sometimes sweet, and usually quite provocative. You look at the photo or illustration she provides and then write a story in 140 characters or fewer (including punctuation and spaces). It is a challenge to make something succinct and interesting. Most of us go for funny or what we think is funny. Join us!

This week's challenge:


God: I gave you specific instructions.

Noah: I got creative.

God: It works better my way.

Noah:  Can I keep the figurehead?

God: NO!

Noah: ARGHH!


17 comments:

ShAKirA CHOONG said...

HA HA HA!
This is SO SO SO GREAT!

I love conversations with GOD.
BRILLIANT!
You GO GIRL!

Have you a great week.

hugs
shakira

Peggy said...

Perfect story from the picture.
Poor Noah, used a little imagination and phooey nothing for his efforts!
Have a great evening!

The Bug said...

LOL!

That corgi :) said...

LOL; this was very cute!!! loved it!

enjoy the day

betty

Susan at Stony River said...

ROFLMAO!!

This is so EXCELLENT -- I never saw Noah in this in a million years but boy does it WORK! "I got creative" LOL

(I used to have a boss just like that btw...*sigh*)

Larry said...

Hmnmmmmm Noah was balsy arguing with GOD he was so close to those famous words... "Noah how long can you tread water?"


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Nessa said...

that was soooo funny. great idea.

Desires

Thom said...

LOL this is great. Poor Noah!!! LOL. Well done my friend :)

SouthLakesMom said...

Thank you, all! You're right, Larry, arguing with God could be very dicey. But Noah thought it was worth a try -- people had been laughing at him for a hundred years!

juliana said...

oh my, this was priceless! ROFLMAO

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Now this is funny, Noah arguing with God on the design. One of the best yet.

Susan's MfM has taken off.

hope said...

Okay, you win the prize today for most creative!

Maybe God was just ticked off because it appears the "Jolly Roger" was actually once nickname for the Devil.

John's comments said...

What's worse was the wife had build a better one while they were arguing

Sylvia K said...

Oh, I love it!! What fun and love your imagination! Well, there may be more truth than fiction here! Have a great week!

Sylvia

Rosidah Abidin said...

Unexpected point of view ;). Very creative! Have a wonderful week.

quilly said...

LOL! I love this. I argue with God frequently. I never win, either.

The Skald said...

hahaha kewl... hahahehe, no, really, it's just, hahaha, too, hahaha!!!

Great entry - best in show. I love laughing out loud and making the entire family stare over at my computer corner!

Cheers!